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Keep on playing those mind games together..
on March 19, 2016
I enjoyed reading this; it had an interesting concept, but it also had a few problems. It's a little slow in places, and some characters are more like paper dolls than people.
Darren is the main character, a young man who can step outside time and walk around while everyone and everything is frozen. He finds that he can read the thoughts of others as well.
He finds out suddenly that he is not alone in this ability when he meets a beautiful young woman while gambling in Atlantic City.
The character of Darren was pretty well drawn, and everything is told from his viewpoint. He finds the young woman, Mira, in Brooklyn, (He has no very good opinion of anyplace other than Manhattan, by the way) and is then drawn into her dark world of danger and revenge.
Results: fun to read, not too deep, and ends on a cliffhanger. It's a series, of course, so you can purchase the next episode, (and the next, and the next after that) if you want to continue.