Top critical review
Should have been a rough draft, not a finished product
November 23, 2018
Remember when you were a kid and your mother said your drawing was beautiful, but it wasn't? When your friends said your cake was delicious and it really tasted like crap?
They appreciate the effort, you have all the right ingredients and they want to encourage you to continue, so they lied.
Whoever proofed and/or edited for this author did no favors by allowing the many plot holes and loose ends to slip by without notice. Creative criticisms are not a bad thing and they can help a talented individual become even better. Sometimes you can't see what's right in front of you, and an associate should have no problem saying "So...what about this?"
That said, great premise to the story, good characters and what looks to be a promising future for this author!
I'll certainly read book two and hope for the best.