Top critical review
Great story with some minor inconsistencies in the writing
February 15, 2019
The story was original with some references to mythology that I've read before. The thing I had a problem with was the author's inconsistencies. The main character mentions a character at the beginning that she later seemed to meet for the first time. Apparently all magic has smells, then only fae magic has a smell, then different magic has different smells. Overall, it was a good story, and I would recommend it, but I was a little disappointed with some of the writing.