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Needs a lot of proofreading but good stories
September 25, 2018
I found the story lines are quite good in this collection. But there is a lot of work that needs to be done on them. Incorrect words being used (ex: bottom instead of button). Some wrong names used, (ex: Miriam changed her name to Sandoval when she moved to a different state, yet her partner called her Castillo). One story had the words blood and bile dripping from people's faces on just about every page it seemed! Some odd sentences that made me wonder if the author knew the meanings of the words she was using (ex: she whimsically sidestepped).