Top critical review
Cute story, really enjoyed it, but needs a lot of editing
Reviewed in the United States on August 6, 2019
A wonderful and sweet story that held my interest, great characters, and an intriguing mystery. However, there are many errors on every page. Missing words, missing punctuation, wrong punctuation, missing quote marks, periods after questions, wrong words, and many typos. Examples – car’s (for plural cars), sort after instead of sought after, what instead of what’s, lightening instead of lightning, right off instead of write-off, its instead of it’s, to instead of too, heals instead of heels (boots with heals), weird writing – “he was to too nice” – just way to many errors on every single page. So be warned there are many errors and it desperately needs editing, but the story itself is wonderful and I enjoyed it. If this was well edited, it would be outstanding.