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Fantasy Thriller Short--leaves too many loose ends
March 16, 2018
When it comes to new writing I often complain about being deluged with too much detail but in this case I’m uncertain as to how the various pieces of this narrative fit together. In book one of the series we are shown an act of terrorism that destroys the present government of this fantasy land. We are introduced to a couple who possess special abilities. In book two we jump a generation and meet Dana their daughter. The enemy would seem to be a company called Biolance. In this book three we meet Keepers, Journeymen, and the Biolance Centre. The lines between good guys and bad guys are blurred when one of the keepers commits an unforgivable act and attempts to cover it up. I am left with the uneasy feeling that there is something I’m missing here.