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The story is fine, and it moves along well
April 21, 2017
The story is fine, and it moves along well. However the writing seems to be targeted to young readers. Even so for a light hearted entertaining read this could hit the mark. The reason I rate it so low is the same reason I won’t be reading any more of Mr. Archer’s work. The editing is terrible. I had the feeling I was reading a first draft.
Shame on Mr. Archer, and SHAME on Amazon. If the book was a buck, I would not have expected much more, but for a mid-priced work it’s inexcusable to deliver such a poor product!