Top positive review
Nice mystery full of editing errors.
September 4, 2018
I enjoyed the book quite a bit. I liked the characters and the plot kept me guessing.
Like other reviewers, I found law enforcement sharing information so freely to be not believable.
The thing that drove me absolutely crazy was all of the glaring grammatical and punctuation errors and the misuse of some words (e.g., bare for bear.) They were so numerous and egregious that they kept jarring me out of the story. I kept having to reread sentences to discern the meaning because of the dearth of commas.
It looks to me like editing errors, so I’m not dinging the author. This book was free on Kindle, which is why I started reading this author. It’s a shame. The errors really detract from a nice little mystery book. I’m not planning to buy the next book in the series if the sample shows it shares the same editing problems.